Ive made some changes to the song now, the pre chorus has been replaced, verses one, three and four have been altered and chorus has been extended to reflect how it sounds to melody (I'm pretty pleased with my melody So now I present to you, the edited version of Trouble in Paradise, I hope it has been edited for the better...I'm still a little unsure on 'my head was spinning like formula one' I'm trying to convey how fast and furious it was, but not sure how well executed that it.
Trouble In Paradise(Verse 1)
They told me I should step away
From the check in desk cos there's a hurricane
But I chose my heart over my head- again
(Verse 2)
Showed your sociopathic ways
A colour wheel of fifty shades
Should've seen less literal signs when my flight was delayed
(Pre chorus)
But my head was spinning like formula one
I was Icarus flying too close to the sun
Never knew how much you'd become
Til it all went wrong
(Chorus)
You are t-t-trouble in paradise
I hold on but I-I-I don't know why
You are t-t-trouble in paradise
I can see a storm brewing in your third eye
You are trouble in paradise
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are trouble)
(Verse 3)
I was stuck in economy
But first class is where you saved my seat
The plane hit turbulence thought we were just unlucky
(Verse 4)
Saw your love for authority
Spiral out of my ability
Wondering why my arm rests were the only ones to hold me
(Pre chorus)
But my head was spinning like formula one
I was Icarus flying to close to the sun
Never knew how much you'd become
Til it all went wrong
(Chorus)
You are t-t-trouble in paradise
I hold on but I-I-I don't know why
You are t-t-trouble in paradise
I can see a storm brewing in your third eye
You are trouble in paradise
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are trouble)
(Bridge)
Hit the runway
Wanted to runaway
In hindsight
Wouldn't board that flight
(Chorus)
You are t-t-trouble in paradise
I hold on but I-I-I don't know why
You are t-t-trouble in paradise
I can see a storm brewing in your third eye
You are trouble in paradise
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are t-t-trouble in paradise)
(You are trouble)