Hi Boydie,
Ticks all the boxes. Think you could 'cherry pick' this as
they won't want 3.30mins. Also think it needs a stronger
hook......something that 'screams' at the top of the neck.
With a lot of sustain
I liked those long bends and they
are 'hooky', but, IMO, I think it needs a stronger one.
Good luck with this. Watch those contracts. Last one I was
offered, the guy not only wanted 50% and the rights to all
versions, he wanted me to pay his tax on all earnings as well
I haven't signed it........