Hi guys and girl,
First post here but read on here a few times in the past. I am a songwriter and try to sing with my acoustic and electric (Rhythm) and I have always found fascination with writing songs and I do it constantly my one worry is, am I getting the point across in my songs and the other worry is it good enough?
Here goes
verse
When you cry
Cause that guy
makes me wanna stop and make a stand
If I have the chance
when I make my stance
I will tell him straight if you want me too
All those drunken times
He's stumbled home late at night
He cant see what this is doing to you
Chorus
See baby see
See baby see
see baby see
how this gets to me
Verse
We'll stick together
Through whatever
Show him you can do better with me
With a push or shove
Money cant buy you love
what kind of love does he give to you
First attempt wrote in an hour and half, I just would appreciate feedback regarding song structure, Lyrics, Possible lyrics added,
Thanks Again