Thank you both.
I wrote this while reading a book called 'The History of History' by Ida Hattemer-Higgins, about a woman who lives in Berlin and wakes up to find herself surrounded by ghosts from the city's past, and the city appears to be literally coming to life. I was not intentionally inspired by it but I definitely was on some level. The book was so rich in imagery, it blew me away.
Apart from that, a lot of the lyrics (especially the first and second verses) are about conformity. The 'army of figures' could be commuters, the 'paralysed nation' follows a reference to television, and with 'sycophantic mantras' I was thinking of company slogans and motivational speakers.
This is definitely not prose, and was never intended to be. There is a very simple rhyming structure and that is why it is set out like that.
I made a primitive recording of myself sort-of singing it, just over two chords, and I really liked the mood of it and intend to make a recording when I have thought of a more interesting 'setting' for it in terms of sounds, instruments or vocal layers.
The way I 'sung' it, the structure seemed pretty obvious. Apart from the second line of the first verse, which overlaps with the third, the lines flow into each other but the structure is definitely there.
I will think about a chorus, I like that idea. As it is, it does just tend to go on and on relentlessly!
If there is a story to this piece, it is that I am standing watching the street and the city fall to pieces and nobody else notices because they're too wrapped up in their work and their lives.
I was also thinking about times I have been deep in my own thoughts, or noticed something I thought was beautiful, and found it strange that all the people around me appeared to be going about their business like nothing mattered, or there was nothing to see.
Sounds a bit self-indulgent when I put it like that, but it's the best way I can think to describe it.
GTB, I'm glad to hear it made you think of Lowry! That is definitely the sort of imagery I had in mind.
Thanks again