[laurabh]

This was a quick write I scribbled down on the journey home tonight, I've re-written it and made it 'flow' a little better, and I just wanted to share it and see what people think.
Laura

VERSE 1:
Bright lights, cold nights,
Dull days, home feels so far away,
Footsteps on the concrete
 
VERSE 2:
Road rage, bus is late,
Horns bleep, music blaring down the streets
Voices whisper down the phone

PRE-CHORUS:
But…
All I can do is wait,
All I can do is stay,
‘Cause…

CHORUS:
It’s just another,
Bad day.
It’s just another,
Sad day.

It’s just another chance,
To laugh at life,
Just another chance to,
Smile.

It’s just another one of those days

VERSE 3:
Babies crying, people sighing,
Shops are closing; the wind’s still blowing,
Beggars paradise outside

VERSE 4:
Sun’s going down, the moon is out,
Headlights bright, the roads are white,
Rain is falling, so silently

PRE-CHORUS
CHORUS
INSTRUMENTAL (15 secs)

BRIDGE:
Daydreaming,
In the window seat,
Life passes by,
Tonight, tonight

CHORUS

It's just another one of those days.

[Sing4me88]

Great write! I think there is a point when everyone will be able to relate to this song! You've managed to take all of the things that piss people off from a height on a bad day and put them into a really good song. I like the rhyming scheme and like the fact that the chorus is in two parts with a great build up in the pre-chorus!

[titiami]

i agree with sing4me88, the lyrics really does depict what really goes on in our daily life's. the rhyming is good. its a good write.

[Reece!]

i really like it cos everyone can relate to it

its a simple but complex write, i liked it