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Read January 14, 2010, 01:09:37 PM #0
lightspeed182

would you rather it be you?




  would you rather it be you?  4/4


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  all alone on the outside looking in.        all the pretty people laugh and dance and sing
                                     d                     c                   d       c      g      d c g d c g         
  its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
       d                    c                    g     d c g                  d                 c                          g     d c em
  the farmer's outside digging with his son.         he holds the leash up high before he loads the gun
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  and the boy just dont know what he wants to do.. would he rather be like you?
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  now the teacher's inside shouting at the kids        'do as youre told, do what i say, do as we bid'
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  and the kids they just dont know their whole life through, would you rather it be you
                                     d                           c                         d       c     g       d c g d c g             
  no the kids they just dont know their whole life through, would you rather it be you
     d               c                    g  d c g          d                 c                           g         d c em
  all alone on the outside looking in.        all the pretty people laugh and dance and singing
                                     d                     c                   d       c      g      d c g d c em       
  its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
                                     d                     c                   d       c      g      d c g d c em
  its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
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  no its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?








 
Read January 15, 2010, 09:50:41 PM #1
tone

Re: would you rather it be you?

Hi Steve - good to see you back on the boards

I think I like this one the best out of all the stuff you've posted here, it's got a real atmosphere to it - I'd be interested to hear the song.

Did a particular incident inspire the song, or did it just pop out of nowhere?

Nice work

Tone


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