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January 14, 2010, 01:09:37 PM
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would you rather it be you?
would you rather it be you? 4/4
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all alone on the outside looking in. all the pretty people laugh and dance and sing
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its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
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the farmer's outside digging with his son. he holds the leash up high before he loads the gun
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and the boy just dont know what he wants to do.. would he rather be like you?
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now the teacher's inside shouting at the kids 'do as youre told, do what i say, do as we bid'
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and the kids they just dont know their whole life through, would you rather it be you
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no the kids they just dont know their whole life through, would you rather it be you
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all alone on the outside looking in. all the pretty people laugh and dance and singing
d c d c g d c g d c em
its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
d c d c g d c g d c em
its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
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no its no wonder that theyre doing what they do.. would you rather it be you?
January 15, 2010, 09:50:41 PM
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Re: would you rather it be you?
Hi Steve - good to see you back on the boards
I think I like this one the best out of all the stuff you've posted here, it's got a real atmosphere to it - I'd be interested to hear the song.
Did a particular incident inspire the song, or did it just pop out of nowhere?
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