thanks everyone who commented, well happy with the responses...

its never occurred to me about an ’uprising’ at the end, im cautious though
because i dont want to lose the vibe of it and get melodramatic or something,
Ive murdered so many tracks by going over the top, but i may have a cunning plan...

i hear the vocal comments, i'll try and sort that..

i really enjoy the forum its given me a real shot in the arm, some focus..
and i value the friends Ive made on here..

cheers all,
nooms

I agree with the comments about the sinister atmosphere.
You seem to have created a lot of impact but in a very subtle and controlled manner.
It's actually very clever.

Justin