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Read February 21, 2012, 02:47:15 AM #0
Sellon

Don't Get Me Wrong

So my ex girlfriend tried to ruin my life, because she left me, and I got with someone else who actually cared, she was a horrible narcissistic bitch, I don't think she's let go, and its been 5 months cause she prank calls me every now and again, and for a while she kept being angry at me saying i ruined her life....that's what this song is about.

I'm getting closer and I don't know what to do
I'm falling in and out again
Cause my bed's still messed up and my clothes still smell like you
We used to be together, we were a part of this town
I'd hear your voice, i'd always expect a letdown
And recently the only deep thing I've heard is your song

I know that it hurts to be alone
But all this shows is that you haven't grown
You still look at me, I still watch you stare
My feelings are gone for you
See if I care
I've survived the worst
I'm making my best
You deserve nothing less than being worthless
Your priorities are such a mess
You're so far away from being selfless

Stop looking through me and start looking at me
Stop looking at me and start looking at you
You're a mess, and that's at your best
Are you done talking?
I'll tell you exactly what I need to make it through
Drive away in your car and I'll just forget you
Forget we ever happened
Forget everything I wrote
Forget everything I said to you
Forget every meaningless word

I know that it hurts to be alone
But all this shows is that you haven't grown
You still look at me, I still watch you stare
My feelings are gone for you
See if I care
I've survived the worst
I'm making my best
You deserve nothing less than being worthless
Your priorities are such a mess
You're so far away from being selfless

I'm getting closer and I don't know what to do
I'm falling in and out again
Cause my bed's still messed up and my clothes still smell like you
We used to be together, we were a part of this town
I'd hear your voice, i'd always expect a letdown
And recently the only deep thing I've heard is your song
But I'm never coming back
So..
Don't get me wrong


I invest my ideas but get swallowed in debt.
 
Read February 22, 2012, 03:56:27 PM #1
Songsmith

Re: Don't Get Me Wrong

Hi Sellon,
             yet more great lyrics, your ex is obviously misguided cos the only person that can really ruin your life is yourself, generally, of course.  Smiley Smiley
 
Read February 22, 2012, 06:08:55 PM #2
Sellon

...

thanks man, I appreciate your feedback as always, I guess you're right, you're usually right.


I invest my ideas but get swallowed in debt.
 
Read February 22, 2012, 10:31:34 PM #3
Timo89

Re: Don't Get Me Wrong

I really like it. The emotions come out very well. Cheer up man. The good things about situations like this are that you learn something from them and that sometimes you can make good songs about them.
Keep it up!
 
Read February 22, 2012, 10:45:11 PM #4
Sellon

...

Thanks man I appreciate it, and yeah, I'm happy, life goes on, people change and so do people's minds, everything always falls into place.


I invest my ideas but get swallowed in debt.
 
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