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Read February 01, 2012, 11:57:51 PM #0
lightspeed182

by the fire rough

http://soundcloud.com/lightspeed182/by-the-fire
 
Read February 02, 2012, 12:17:45 AM #1
Pez

Re: by the fire rough

quieter than the last one (just an observation!) and a bit more "shadows" . prefer the last one to be honest. thinkin of getting some shakers myself so good call on that Smiley
 
Read February 02, 2012, 09:40:22 PM #2
lightspeed182

Re: by the fire rough



yeah it didn't come out as good as curve shot but ive had the tune in my head for ages so finally
just got it down. ill just move on the the next one prob


steve
 
Read February 03, 2012, 05:31:06 PM #3
nooms

Re: by the fire rough



this is nice, sounds like a western theme in places...
these are obviously ideas your playing around with, do you sing lightspeed ?




i may not believe this tomorrow...
 
Read February 03, 2012, 10:20:36 PM #4
lightspeed182

Re: by the fire rough

hey nooms

thanks for the comments. no i dont sing but have plenty of lyrics for other songs of mine.
i might try and give it a go though . how bout you? do you sing?

lightspeed
 
Read February 03, 2012, 10:28:48 PM #5
nooms

Re: by the fire rough

only in the bath


i may not believe this tomorrow...
 
Read February 03, 2012, 11:52:11 PM #6
Schavuitje

Re: by the fire rough

Hiya Smiley

That's a nice little country type tune you have there. At the moment it's a bit rough of course but that doesn't matter,
the idea is there and plain to hear Smiley

I wouldn't worry too much about the vocals, unless you are completely tone deaf lol

I don't consider myself to be a vocalist either, but as I'm on my own I have to sing Sad I think I just manage to

get by without sounding God awful.

I would love to hear some lyrics to it.


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Read February 04, 2012, 06:10:29 PM #7
estreet

Re: by the fire rough

I think you have the makings of a good tune there. Probably sounds more like a vocal song than an instrumental to me. It would be easier to hear the tune well if the guitar tuning wasn't a bit off.


Youth & enthusiasm are no match for age and treachery.
 
Read February 10, 2012, 10:12:01 AM #8
Songsmith

Re: by the fire rough

Hi,
    yeah, I like this & it's great that you have put it up 'rough'. It holds up well, you could do alot on it as the melody line is strong. Nice one
 
Read February 10, 2012, 11:33:29 PM #9
jmacdon

Re: by the fire rough

what a lovely little ditty - definitely reminds me of sitting round a camp fire singing songs, and then john wayne coming over riding his horse !!

I can hear this as background music on a TV programme - mind you I've now got visions of Dick Emery running around to this music being chased by a busty blond LOL.....

 
Read February 11, 2012, 12:16:35 PM #10
Dutchbeat

Re: by the fire rough

nice tune!!! I think would be nice to have vocals and lyrics to it as well

 
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