cheers, folks...i love the cure, too... and them beatles...
regarding the lyrics...i'm happy to hold my hands up and acknowledge i just threw together something fairly simplistic for this song...i worry sometimes i'm trying to be too clever with some of my lyrics. I thoroughly enjoyed the air-headed composition here...i found it quite liberating, really.
regarding my vocals...the last ten years of heavy gigging resulted in me completely losing my voice around a year ago...i had a course of speech therapy last summer, but made the decision to quit the band i was in, as i simply can't hold it together for 35 songs a night a couple of nights per week anymore.
i can just about hold some songs together now, but i have to shorten phrases, keep it lower and reduce the strain otherwise it'll fall apart again...which, i was warned, could lead to permanent damage.
no more excuses, though...just massive thanks for all the positives