Lovely song and playing! Feel a bit cheeky reviewing such a lovely piece cause I'm such a newbie, but as they say, the more you put in, the more you get back! I got a little lost with the structure for the 1st couple of listens, but it made perfect sense after the 3rd listen. Sometimes it's nice to have a song that flows through without a typical hooky chorus so for me if you can add a little clarity in structure somehow to solve my 1st/2nd listen issue and to make the song really stick in the head, then it's perfect. Equally you could add a chorus or take this any number of different ways...really looking forward to listening to see how you develop this from this stage to the finished song...as I need some tips!