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The Sun Always Follows The Moon

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Iamnewtothis

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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #15 on: August 07, 2015, 03:15:47 AM »
Hi there:



I love the hook in the chorus, I like the arrangement, lyrics are clever too, I am probably going to to sound dumb here but what does the lyric "the sun always follows the moon" actually mean? What is this song about? Because what I gathered is that it's about growing up? Is that right? And who is "him"?


Sorry to be nit picky, I love the chorus the hook is great as I've said, but I am just offering my perspective I guess.


Kind Regards
Diane
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #16 on: September 25, 2015, 07:46:12 PM »
Don't have much to say because I'm new but it sounds really nice and I love your vocals. :)
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #17 on: September 30, 2015, 11:24:19 AM »
This is very good A. A great melody and I'm a melody man myself. I wouldn't change anything personally.

John
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #18 on: October 02, 2015, 08:30:47 PM »
Classy stuff, this  :)
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #19 on: October 02, 2015, 11:51:32 PM »
Most excellent tune and performance.  I like the subtle shift in the chorus and the effect of moving around the tonal center.
Vocals are outstanding as well!

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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #20 on: October 04, 2015, 04:40:41 PM »
I really like it - coming across pretty well mix-wise on my lappy. If I have a crit it's that the delivery of the last chorus line - feels a bit clunky compared to the rest and I find myself wanting to hear you sing/phrase it differently, specifically that the word "remember" seems a bit tooooo loooonnnng. JMO and all that.
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #21 on: October 04, 2015, 06:59:14 PM »
Hi,
We thought this is a well crafted and well produced song.  The lyrics have some very nice imagery.  It being in the third person however made us feel somewhat disconnected from the story. Just our thoughts, nice job overall.

Jay and Mike.
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #22 on: October 04, 2015, 08:32:57 PM »
This is work in progress?

It sounds like a great finished song to me. Can't really fault it. Brilliant.
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #23 on: October 24, 2015, 07:02:04 PM »
Quote from: Doodles on October 04, 2015, 08:32:57 PM
This is work in progress?

It sounds like a great finished song to me. Can't really fault it. Brilliant.

I totally agree. There is nothing more to do here. This is a fantastic piece of work!

I love the lyric... that sense of hopelessness... with the reminder that there is always light at the end of the tunnel.

This very professionally recorded and mixed... it sounds like it should be in the marketplace and not on WIP forum. Well done!

Best Wishes
Mo
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Re: The Sun Always Follows The Moon

« Reply #24 on: November 14, 2015, 01:36:55 AM »
great song, loved it. what else can I say, faultless in my opinion,
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