[Reed-E]

here is a song i wrote called save the last dance this is just the chrous and verse you can hear it on my fan page on facebook

chrous
whos gonna save the last dance for me
whos gonna love me eternally
i want it to be you
i'll wait and see
if me and you are ever
gonna be

verse
i want you so bad
i wish you knew
all the ways i think about
yu look so sexy when you pout
can't help but stare at those pictures
and when we go to the clubs
all the guys they chat you up
so envious wish i was your pup

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?ref=home#/pages/GReed/82663788525?ref=ts


please leave comments on my fan page and join if you like
thank you georgie reed

[tone]

Hey Georgie
You already know I think this is a catchy little number - and reminds me of Prince which brings a big smile to my face.
Where are you sourcing your beats, or do you write them yourself?  I'd be interested to hear you work with some instrumentalists - can imagine a bigger sound behind your voice.
Keep it up mate - sounding good
Tone

[tone]

Hi Georgie
Just to let you know I moved this to the song reviews forum as I think it will get more attention there.
Thanks
Tone