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You made my soul climb.
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You made my soul climb.
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Vintage54
Platinum Album
Posts: 746
You made my soul climb.
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May 15, 2015, 10:52:37 PM »
You made my soul climb.
When those natural disasters
Of the personal kind
Catch up with the good times
And leave them behind
You said, it don't pay to dwell
Or think about
All those clouds
That make the stars go out
You made my soul climb
You made my soul climb
Made it climb
When i was down
In the valley so low
When the cards were against me
Kings and aces combined
You fell down on my table
Like four of a kind
When my vineyard grew sour
When the grapes turned to lime
You nourished the roots with honey
And sweetened the vine
You made my soul climb
You made my soul climb
Made it climb
When i was down
In the valley so low
I was going nowhere before you
A letter without an address
Where would my soul be without you
Down in the valley i guess
When my countenance darkened
When the brightness grew faint
And i turned to the clowns
For the use of their paint
And though i smiled at the people
In my oversized shoes
My heart was an orphan
In the home of the blues
But you made my soul climb
You made my soul climb
Made it climb
When i was down
In the valley so low.
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tomcrocus
Solo Gig
Posts: 459
Re: You made my soul climb.
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May 16, 2015, 01:28:40 AM »
Hi vintage,
you just can't knock it,i'm getting a hymn like feel to this one,
i love the chorus,i love the second verse and i love the reference to the clown
and the oversize shoes in the third verse,very nice,
Tom.
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hardtwistmusic
Stadium Tour
Posts: 3037
Central Oregon Sunset
Re: You made my soul climb.
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May 16, 2015, 05:17:10 AM »
Loved the lyric. I didn't even speculate on what kind of music you'll come up with. You always surprise me in a good way.
But it sang easily. I didn't find a real dramatic vocal melody for it, but that's as much about knowing that you will find one and not trying that hard.
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Vintage54
Platinum Album
Posts: 746
Re: You made my soul climb.
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May 18, 2015, 01:36:51 AM »
Thanks guys!
Thanks for the belief, and the fuel to carry on.
vintage54
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Paulski
Stadium Tour
Posts: 4418
Re: You made my soul climb.
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May 19, 2015, 05:56:47 PM »
Hi vintage
No, more than a hymn - I'm hearing
gospel
in this one.
Now, if I were a religious man I'd be raising my hands in the air for that rousing chorus
And that clown verse is just dripping with pathos!
Another fine write!
Paul
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