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'Dream On (Kiss My Face)' - Neil C's competition?

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Alan Starkie

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« on: April 22, 2015, 03:02:22 PM »
I wrote this this morning to kick start Neil C's competition idea?

https://soundcloud.com/alanstarkie/dream-on-kiss-my-face/s-kEbkW

It's rough but it's my entry if there is a competition after all.

***Boydie - if this is breaking any rules or in the wrong place (at the wrong time) just delete this post.***


Dream on (Kiss my face)

I've got, one dream too many and I can't wake up
There ain't, too many things to fill my cup
I want to be a, Freebird like the big man said
For the love of God but she ain't in my head

I'm a, bad man you're better off without
I can't, keep my big mouth shut, I just wanna shout
My mama made me who I am
You need to put me to sleep
Somewhere I can rest my head and just

Dream on
Dream on
Just roll me over
Dream on
I've nothing to wake up for
And the world can kiss my face

I had a, red dog when I was a boy
Chased by, a little black bird that used him like a toy
Late at night, he'd hit the floor like wet sand
I didn't know then
But now I understand and I'm gonna

Dream on
Dream on
Just roll me over
Dream on
I've nothing to wake up for
And the world can kiss my face

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Binladeda

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« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2015, 06:06:36 PM »

  ;D ;D liking this Alan.  Nice strumming, hard, fast and accurate
   And nice clean sound......think this might be my favourite of yours
  Like the energy and the rawness of it.  Freebird is there somewhere,
  but who cares it's great  ;D ;D

  Going to have to think about this comp now  ;D
   
Nowt as queer as folk...........my gran

Alan Starkie

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« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2015, 07:51:48 PM »
Come on Bin.

You know you wanna. Don't leave me by myself.

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« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2015, 04:35:48 PM »
Ya coulda waited a day or two to set the bar THIS darned high.  ;o)   

Beautiful,  --  and it's still just a WIP. 
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