Country Style has always sounded cool and sweet to my ears. Loved that sliding strings with a redneck voices. Always I dreamt of writing such in that jenre and once I started several country songs but finished only one.
English is not native to me, unfortunately, and I always wonder how good and deep I expressed my thoughts and feelings. Hope, you guys would improve it a little. This is not for commercial as I am a looser songwriter writing in three languages and no luck in any of them. Hope my children would be listening to their father's antology like a long distant message from another generation
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Here it is... I would appreciate everyone who'd like to improve my antology for my future children.
“Love rhapsody”
Do you remember melodies gone off?
Young voices sounded so live and nice.
Once in a lifetime rhapsodies of love.
We used to watch how the Sun arise.
My ears will never forget that flavour.
So good it sounded, your lovely voice.
The Sun would shine in your hair a rainbow.
In hair like rainfall, so warm with noise.
Refrain:
Both in the Sunset and early morning
We’d sing serenades in love so much.
You’re like a violin, I was a bowlike.
There was no music without our touch.
While it was raining all cats and dogs through
We’d keep our flashes close under the leaves.
But when the sunbursts empaled the clouds blue
We’d be enjoying the Nature’s gifts.
Do you remember I was your boyfriend?
We fell in love two like mirror twins.
There should have been amongst a happy song end,
But we forgot the words, they're lost between.
