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« on: April 19, 2015, 05:40:50 PM »
In this context an anthem is "A popular song, especially a rock song felt to sum up the attitudes or feelings associated with a period or social group."

There were numerous "anthems" in my youth that defiantly promoted the virtues of "drugs, sex, and rock and roll."  

For years, I wondered about how some of those must feel to their writers/performers later in life.  

This lyric is a compilation of about six different false starts at trying to capture that question in a song.  IF it's any good, it just proves that ANYTHING can become a song if you just keep at it long enough.  

And yeah.... I already know it's too long.  ;o)

COCAINE ANTHEM

BRIDGE:  
Seemed so very simple back then,     --    if it feels good, do it.  
Nothing complicated, man       --     really nothin to it.  
Better too fast than than too damned slow.  
Burn a little money on  a little bit of blow.  
Better too high than way too low.  
When it's goin your way, no one tells you where to go.  

But yesterday, my daughter’s little boy – six years old you know.  
Said “grandpa, I heard a song today, playin on the radio.”


That singer he said “cocaine feels like freedom.”
That singer said that “cocaine’s my best friend.”
That singer said that “cocaine's better than a cool summer rain.”  
And then he looked right at me askin,  “Grandpa, What’s cocaine?”

Well, I'm really not that sure what I should tell him.  
I’m really not that sure what I should say.  
Do I tell him that’s his Grampa doin the singing?  
Soon enough, he'll find out anyway.

Do I tell him back then I was young and foolish?
Do I tell him back then I was often wrong?  
Should I bother tryin to tell him what I’ve learned since then?  
Or should I blow it off and tell him  “Hey, it’s just a song?”  

CHORUS:  
Well right about then it all gets complicated.  
And you know my heart is beating in my throat.  
How do I tell this sweet little boy who trusts me like I’m God
about that damned old Cocaine Anthem that I wrote.  


VERSE 2:  Three stanzas  -
Nothin I can tell him that his Mama doesn't  know.  
My daughter still remembers what I’m like when I’m on Blow.  
Well, I wish I could explain it, but  I can’t, cause it’s too wrong.    
I chicken out and all I say is “better  ask your Mom.”  

Now, the oldie’s stations play that song bout a hundred times a day.  
It’s like a chicken coming home to roost every time I hear it play.  
How will I tell this sweet little boy who means more than life to me.  
That his Grandpa ain’t worth listening to, or lookin up to no-sir-ee.  

Well, I was  in and out of rehab when I wasn’t on the stage.  
And his Mama barely knew me until she was past his age.    
How do I tell this sweet little boy who means more than life to me.  
That his Grandpa ain’t worth listening to, or lookin up to no-sir-ee.  


BRIDGE:  
Seemed so very simple back then,     --    if it feels good, do it.  
Nothing complicated, man       --     really nothin to it.  
Better too fast than than too damned slow.  
Burn a little money on  a little bit of blow.  
Better too high than way too low.  
When it's goin your way, no tells you where to go.  

But yesterday, my daughter’s little boy – six years old you know.  
Said “grandpa, I heard a song today, playin on the radio.”


CHORUS:  
Well you know that life can get real complicated.  
And sometimes life can hit a sour note.  
How do I tell this sweet little boy who trusts me like I'm God
about that damned old Cocaine Anthem that I wrote.


BRIDGE:  
Yesterday, my daughter’s little boy – six years old you know.  
Said “grandpa, I heard a song today, playin on the radio.”
But How do I tell this little boy who trusts me like I'm God
about that damned old Cocaine Anthem that I wrote?

« Last Edit: April 28, 2015, 05:43:31 PM by hardtwistmusic »
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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2015, 07:08:21 PM »
Hi Verlon

Don't know why no-one commented on this - I think it's great!
I don't think it's too long - once it is arranged I'm sure the sections will fall in place.
But didn't Eric Clapton write this? Haha!

Maybe the title could be "Cocaine Anthem" to draw us in better..?

Nice one!
Paul

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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2015, 08:54:42 PM »

 HEY VERLON

 maaaaaaannnnn that was cooooooool

 for me this is a fantastic story and the reader really can feel the effort and thought
 that has gone into this
 I imagined some one like Roger Daltrey  from the who with his young ones
 
 as a lyric I worry if it is going to be to long
 but I would love to hear this get the music it deserves
 
 you should be very proud of this verlon lyricists dream of writing stories like this
 and I love the twist in this very clever

            TAKE A BOW,  THE CROWD ARE ON THEIR FEET

 


 

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« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2015, 11:22:57 PM »

       Hi Verlon,
           Yea, "It's just a song" but it's a bloody good one. Music or none, it sits along side me now, and i doubt if it will ever get up and leave.

                              Vintage54

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« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2015, 03:40:03 PM »
Benjo, Paulski and Vintage54 -  I thank each of you for the encouraging reviews.  I never get discouraged by "no reviews" but I always wonder whether it means the lyric was no good or just "fell down the ladder of songs too quickly" to be noticed. 
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