Found this a little strange, just seems like someone is doodling with a phone..what am I missing?
best, Kevin
I think I'm hearing the same thing Kevin. I think what it NEEDS is the vocal. I think this is a vocal driven song.
That's what I felt was "missing." I can now "hear" what this wants to be.
So, Doodles, if you want me to.... I'd be happy to sing in a vocal treatment and submit it to you. If (and only if) you like it, then it would be (imo) time to think about additional instrumentation. To add instrumentation right now would be to restrict the vocal (again, imo).
Let me know.