P.S.: Another one of my string of experimental writings, this one is kind of a seriously personal song, but I'd love to get a few more objective critiquing on it, please leave your comments, thank you. And if you can relate or sympathize to it, let me know too, if you want. Thanks to all who participate.
-Chorus-
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I'll wait..
-Verse One-
A thousand lights flashes in my sleep
A thousand faces but you're the one I need
You're not here and my heart's a thousand feet deep
You got me to miss you, now I don't know what to do
-Pre-Chorus-
You said to wait
I will obey
Forget what my mind says
I'll go my heart's way
-Chorus-
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I'll wait..
-Verse 2-
Each single night since, I lay a romantic dinner
Staring at the door, roses and candles on the floor
Waiting for you to come, to see the smile you wear
You got me to miss you, I don't know what yo do.
-Pre-Chorus-
You said to wait
I will obey
Forget what my mind says
I'll go my heart's way
-Chorus-
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I'll wait..
-Bridge-
I miss you like a bad shot
And I want you like crack
I wish I could kiss you like pasta
And cuddle like cats
I don't think I can go on
But
-Chorus-
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I'll wait..
-Rap/ Verse Three-
I'm like peanut butter without the jelly
I'm as good but not as jolly
Without you I'm not happy
I'm a drug addict without the acid
Its too hard to find the mind to miss what we did
We'd go out and party like Timmy and Ally
I'm sorry that wasn't too witty. To be
With you, its like sunset with stars
Startling my sight, surprising my eyes
I'm saying that I want you here, but I understand you can't be
I'll be here waiting for you to come back to me
The odds aren't in my favor, things are worse than before but when you come back I'll be lying on the floor
With my little dinner, staring at the door
Things are the same as before you hit the car
Until that day baby I'll wait
-Chorus-
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I'll wait..