OK... All change again. Decided to add another verse, but not sure it needs a middle eight as well. Would be ingested to hear peoples thoughts are on having a third verse but no middle eight or having both.
I'll post the lyrics again below to save people having to keep going back to the first page.
VERSE 1
When silence becomes
The only sound I hear
When every thought I have
Leaves me filled with fear
When the darkness falls
And the light fails to rise
When the world looks bleak
Through sightless eyes
CHORUS
I walk a fine line
Between love and hate
While destiny fights
To enrich my fate
With a tainted heart
I bid the world farewell
Checkin’ in once again
To life’s "Heartbreak Hotel'
VERSE 2
When all I have left
Is a heart prone to weep
When all I desire
Is dark endless sleep
When life passes by
And I miss the last train
When the tears that I shed
Are obscured by the rain
MIDDLE 8
I see the bottle on the dresser
I see the answer in the mirror
I hear the slow ticking of time
I hear the laughter that isn't mine
I feel the faith slipping away
I feel the need for a brighter day
I long for strength to help me cope
I long for someone to give me hope
VERSE 3
When I look in the mirror
And tell myself lies
When the smile turns to frown
And the laughter dies
When I reach for the bottle
And the well has run dry
When the pain is so real
And I can no longer cry
CHORUS
I walk a fine line
Between love and hate
While destiny fights
To enrich my fate
With a tainted heart
I bid the world farewell
Checkin’ out for the last
From life's "Heartbreak Hotel'
OUTRO
When a new day dawns
And my sorrows they cease
When the pain is no more
I can embrace my peace
When the pain is no more
I can embrace my peace