Make It (Explicit)

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tracyl

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« on: March 26, 2015, 05:57:43 PM »
P.S.: Hey guys, I wrote this song, might be a little over the top and downright cliché but I just wanted to try something new. Check it out.

I follow my dreams
I'm stronger than I seem
I'll realize my dreams
I'll make it to the top
I won't let you here
I'll bring you with me
I won't leave you here
When I make it to the top

When I was a you child, I was shy
Looking for the big life but didn't try
Cause the big boys looked too strong, everything took too long
And I couldn't possibly be better, cause
I never had a better cause
They were about feeding families and the future
But I was all into getting fortune, cuz
And maybe it makes me no different, that I'm far from important
Yet my dream's gonna reach millions, or maybe I'm dreaming
But I won't wake up til it feels real enough to seem
Like I'm awake, that this isn't fake, that I won't need someone to blame
A bigger life and even more fame, like nature's tame
It's all about the same damn

Someone who's living a lie, won't have time to realize
That life gives them enough time, to be what they aspire
And I don't know if I can hold on, or be strong
But I'll agree, that I'm incomplete, without my lyrics
Or my dreams, but that's irrelevant, I need somewhere to vent
I'm a reach the top then I'm a look down
and see you still dreaming, sill on your ass and waiting
I'll stay on that spot, I got my feet off the ground
and now I'll keep on screaming loud, till you hear me
Get off the ground, go make a sound, go take a stand
Make yourself belong, where others don't
Do the things you want when others dwon't
And everything you wanted to do, it'll all become true, cause

I follow my dreams
I'm stronger than I seem
I'll realize my dreams
I'll make it to the top
I won't let you here
I'll bring you with me
I won't leave you here
When I make it to the top

New lyrics, means new critics
Everyone with their own opinion
I mean do they even listen
Past the words, past the fiction
Past my voice, past the diction
Past these things make it human, yeah
I'm like, "Do you even look for my message?"
I guess it's boring to search what's hidden, in this age
Why not just say this song is a big load of garbage?
Instead of sitting down and analyzing the verses.
Of course, I respect the songs that work
The hits that hit the top of charts
Some are classics waiting for a good critic
That stopped to hate, stopped feeling like they're psychic
I mean, do you even know who you try to mess with
Some people who tried hard to get where they had reached at
How will you help them get better if all you say's it's stupid
Like do you think that you're better or that you're the better fit
Yeah, I know I'm not the best in the world
And I'm sure I'm no genius with my simple words
I mean critics are good if they help without the cold
Why not tell me what's good for next time I record
You might even receive a free album as a trophy
So that your friends believe that you even met me

I follow my dreams
I'm stronger than I seem
I'll realize my dreams
I'll make it to the top
I won't let you here
I'll bring you with me
I won't leave you here
When I make it to the top

jamieF

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« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2015, 06:14:07 PM »
New lyrics, means new critics
Everyone with their own opinion
I mean do they even listen
Past the words, past the fiction
Past my voice, past the diction

We can all relate to that.

Damn! You could have called this "The Songwriters Lament". A lot to think about in this, plus some very complex timing. I like it.
Epitaph on a blues singers tombstone: "I didn't wake up this morning......"

tracyl

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« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2015, 12:23:55 AM »
Thanks Jamie. Lol you're right I should but, not the whole song is about that. But thanks for commenting.