Benjo,
Iv'e seen the world, through the same window. Great chorus, and the 4 lines that follow, as "Oneman" said, are excellent. The final 4 lines, i would have gone with, "When will the sunshine, break through the clouds" etc. But, don't want to throw a spanner in a fine piece of work. If you feel that it's right, then it's right. Amen!
Vintage54