I like it too!
little feedback:
music and lyrics don't work together for me - sad lyrics with quite happy music (especially ending on a major chord on "gone AWAY" kinda kills the feeling for me.
The tambourine comes in a little sudden, but this can be easily fixed by letting the bass to a slide into its note, thereby making the transition a little smoother.
like how your arrangement slowly grows with the tambourine, bass, doubled voice and later strings (although I hear some serious arrangement problems here, that and because the sounds aren't great is why it doesn't sound like strings). I feel like it could use a little more after the 2nd chorus. I also would be careful with repeating the chorus yet another time.
hope this helps... if you want some more tips on the string arrangement or anything else, send me a PM or we can also skype!
f.
PS: Everyone is having problems spelling my name it appears