I wrote this three years ago, and it was met with mixed reviews. I have some ideas for how to improve it musically, but would like any additional input. Thanks in advance.
I AM THE EARTH
www.reverbnation.com/hardtwistmusicsongwriterVerse:
I am the clouds, I am the wind.
I am the tide that's rolling in.
I am the rivers, I am the sea.
I am the air that you breathe.
Chorus:
I am the earth and I am not your property.
I am here for you to use... but I do not belong to you.
If anything, You belong to me.]
VERSE:
I am the woods, I am the plain.
I am the desert you cannot tame.
I am the ice, I am the stone.
The only place you've ever known.
CHORUS:
I am the earth and I am not your property.
I am here for you to use... but I do not belong to you.
If anything, You belong to me.]BRIDGE:
I have nurtureed you, sustained you.
I am the soil from which you grew.
You're contempt for me
cannot be explained.
Short Chorus to out:
I am the earth and I am not your property.
If anything, you belong to me.