Would anyone like to collab on this?

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062876344

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« on: February 06, 2015, 04:52:03 PM »
V1
I gave all I had
to your selfish charity
it became quite clear
you know not of parity

V2
in your distinguished guilt
the path you have chosen
holds no moral bearing
with what you have proven

Chorus
you hold yourself high
in the wake of the sea
with not any regard
for what was to be

V3
ill plant my stake
in this gravelly ruin
I'll entertain the idea
that I know what i'm doing

V4
But I dont, But I dont
you wreck the foundation
of my castle of stone
the dictator of a broken nation

Chorus
you hold yourself high
in the wake of the sea
with not any regard
for what was to be

Neil C

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« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2015, 06:03:23 PM »
Hi 062876344
I like these and would be interested. I do a variety of styles, have a listen to me here
https://soundcloud.com/neilconnor-2 and please let me know.
 :)
Neil
songwriter of no repute..

062876344

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« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2015, 06:10:41 PM »
Hi there neil,

Yes! i would love it if you could have a take on what you think these songs sound like.

i wrote this song with a very simple tune in mind: i think it would sound best with just an acoustic guitar but am willing to hear what you think would sound best!

Please feel free to DM me if you want!

Thanks a million

Alex Bryson

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« Reply #3 on: February 26, 2015, 07:07:15 PM »
Alex.   I would suggest that you post your lyrics here AND in the lyrics section - perhaps with a link to the collaboration post.  Use the lyrics section to draw attention to your post here. 

Just a suggestion.  Not all of us read the collabs section regularly because there is often no action here.  The lyrics section is the most active section.  Most of us read it often.
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PALJAS

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« Reply #4 on: October 18, 2015, 07:57:13 AM »
Dear 062876344,

This lyrics is delicious.

I am a young producer from Belgium looking for a good lyrics to work with.
I have a recording studio and a singer in my use. I hope you will allow me to use this lyrics.
If you are interested I can show what I made already.

Greets PALJAS