basically if anyone is interested in collabing with me on this song then please feel free to PM me and we can work something out.
it needs to have a melody thought out amongst other things and since i am inexperienced i would appreciate someone to help me through the process the first time so i can get the hang of songwriting!
TAKE WHAT I HOLD (boundaries of my castle)
(verse)
Go ahead, tell them what you believe to be truth
even though you've never held any proof
go and tear the boundaries of my castle down
and look upon my suffering with a distasteful frown
you've never, never had the disposition to care
in your minds eye is that what you think to be fair
(pre chorus)
after all is said and all is done
why should you kill what is already nothing
when it is you, when it is you, you who has won?
(Chorus)
telling of pain is all but hopeless
the person I face is shallow and blameless
I stand in the shade of your innocent glory
take what I hold holy; rip the truth from my story
(verse)
when all of your lies are weak and spent
am i the one that is broken and bent?
are you so sure that I am to follow?
even though I still bathe in my sadness and sorrow
take what is left, rape it away
be thorough; let none of it stay
(pre chorus)
after all is said and all is done
why should you kill what is already nothing
when it is you, when it is you, you who has won?
(Chorus)
telling of pain is all but hopeless
the person I face is shallow and blameless
I stand in the shade of your innocent glory
take what I hold holy; rip the truth from my story
(verse)
cast a glance, what is it you see?
The sin and regret residing in me.
Where all that I've done is naked and bare
so everyone knows what is there
Or is it a sight you choose to ignore
and when the moment is right you notice once more
(pre chorus)
after all is said and all is done
why should you kill what is already nothing
when it is you, when it is you, you who has won?
(Chorus)
telling of my pain is nothing but shameless
the person you face is shallow and hopeless
stand in the shade of my guilty glory
ill take what you hold holy and rip the truth from your story
(the weird endy bit)
after all i've done and all i've said.
Why should I kill what is already nothing?
After all It is me who has won
