Hi there Vintage
thanks very much for your reply. ill try to explain why i used 'rape' instead of take or other words. i suppose the majority of what rape is and means is doing something without a persons consent and also it is thought to be a brutal almost animalistic sentiment when you rape someone. you are sort of 'claiming' a person if you will and in the song i guess i meant take everything i have away as you (the girl/boy) owns me in some respects.
(disclaimer: i in by no way mean literal rape. i mean it figuratively)
also i found the first song i ever wrote. although i do believe this to be extremely childish. i wrote it last year around this time during exam period when i was meant to be revising (thug life). i wrote it about my girlfriend of 4 years who was sadly taken away from me when she was ran over by a bus. it isnt what i would call "good material" but it helped me to sorta express myself even if noone saw it.
Also i cannot claim the entirety of this song to be mine as the first 2 lines are effectively stolen from photograph by nickelback but i did not realise this at the time and went ahead with the song. i only realised after that i had plagiarised.(verse 1)
staring at that photograph
every time it makes me laugh
thinking about the times that we had
I swear ill never get them back
(verse 2)
remembering that time when we...
took that boat out to sea
and then lay under the stars
and forgot about who we are
(bridge)
Im thinking about your face
whilst packing your old suitcase
with all the things that we had
dont you know it makes me sad
(chorus X2)
never knew what it cost
to lose someone you loved
im staring into the abyss
now that I know what I miss
(interlude)
(verse 3)
maybe thats what god meant
to take you when I was spent
im laying down under the stars
but I dont know which one you are
I hope that you are up there
thinking about me down here
im on earth lying in a place
where we used to play
(bridge)
(chorusX2)
(skit)
im not thinking about your face
or packing your old suitcase
im leaving all the things that we had
and that doesnt make me feel sad
(chorus X2)
staring at the photograph
every time it makes me laugh
thinking about the time that we had
and hoping I can bring you back