[Jane99]

Hi:)
These yrics aren't finished yet and i don't know how i should finish them. It would be great if you could give me some advise

Lyrics:

My six strings aren't what they used to be
it was a moment of hope nothing i could keep
maybe it's just not ment to be
and maybe i should set this free

yesterday i locked it all away
all my dreams with those broken strings
but I walways end up

coming back to this old guitar
playing those songs i used to write
with all my heart with all i got
it was a perfect time for the first time
but right now right here
is where it ends

[tomcrocus]

My six strings aren't what they used to be
it was a moment of hope nothing i could keep
maybe it was just not meant to be
and maybe i should set this free

but i've got a guitar and i've got desire
a supersonic soul and my heart's on fire
give me the vibes and just set me free
cos maybe after all it was meant to be

yesterday i locked it all away
all my dreams with those broken strings
but i allways end up,back at the start
with a head full of dreams and a flame in my heart

cos i've got a guitar and i've got desire
a supersonic soul and my heart's on fire
give me the vibes and just set me free
cos maybe after all it was meant to be

right here right now back to the start
i used to play those songs with a flame in my heart
right here right now back to the start
i used to play those songs with a flame in my heart
it's never ever over i tell you my friend
but right now right here that's where it ends.


Hello jane,
               it might be a different tune to yours but that's
my take on it,best wishes,
                                     tom.

[hardtwistmusic]

To figure out "where to go" with this song, figure out "where it's already going." 

The protagonist/writer is trying to quit.  Now quitting music is like quitting smoking.  Even when you know you should, it's addictive. 

The old joke about quitting smoking goes like this.  "It's easy to quit smoking...  I've done it a thousand times. 

Apply that concept to your "quitting guitar" and you have a hook and an ending.