'Done By You'

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HeyYou

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« on: January 21, 2015, 09:33:55 PM »
It's been a long time since I have posted here so...

This called 'Done By You'


I cannot define it with words
This is more than just a love
I could show you this in hearts
Hold my hand kiss me on the lips let me feel your touch

I cannot define it with words
This is more than just a love
Cut my veins I could show you this with blood
Hit me hurt me let me feel your touch

Chorus

Hurt me, hate me, flame me, kiss me, love me, treat me
I don't care what it is
As long as I feel something
That done by you

You can go and cheat on me
Everything will be fixed when you'll say
I love you cause nothing's really matters
As long as it done by you

Chorus

Hurt me, hate me, flame me, kiss me, love me, treat me
I don't care what it is
As long as I feel something
That done by you

Touch me, close my eyes
Whisper in my ear 'I love you'
Feel me and treat me, push me away and hurt me
It doesn't really matters as long as it done by you

Chorus

Hurt me, hate me, flame me, kiss me, love me, treat me
I don't care what it is
As long as I feel something
That done by you

PeeJay

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« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2015, 06:44:13 PM »
Hi,

This does a good job of depicting someone desperate for attention but i'm not sure people would be able to connect with the abusive side of it and therefore identify with the narrator.

Or maybe i'm just speaking for myself! 

Cheers,

Phil.
I don't know what i'm doing but i do it anyway.

HeyYou

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« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2015, 08:39:23 PM »
Hi,

This does a good job of depicting someone desperate for attention but i'm not sure people would be able to connect with the abusive side of it and therefore identify with the narrator.

Or maybe i'm just speaking for myself! 

Cheers,

Phil.
Ok Ty.
Any other comments?