[JackyBeat]

Hey everyone, Hope you have a wonderful happy new year.

To the point looking for some feedback on this song I wrote and Marrianna
fixed up for me. I couldn't of done it with her so I can't take all the credit.

Background of the song Is this, I met a boy, yes a boy. I feel in love very quickly
and we had got together in a relationship. Beforehand I had been single for quite
a while because never really met someone who took my interest until I met this guy.
I've had a rough up and downs life and I had built up these boundaries. It was hard
for me to let someone new in. I ended up saying something that hurt this boy because
I was stupid among some other things. We split and this is my sorry and my give me
another chance song. I'm a bit of a Taylor swift at heart

My aim for the song is nothing other than for personal reasons. Its not a hit. It doesn't
have a melody or vocals to it although I wouldn't mind working with someone to finish it in
that regards. My aim is just for him to like it and If he takes another chance on me or not
it will have been worth it.

Looking for feedback on the lyrics overall. If it fits the background (Why I wrote it to say
sorry and perhaps win him back)? Feedback on lyrics, Is there anything you would change?

I hope you like it. Here's the lyrics,
 
Intro:
I knew you were the one when I lay there in your arms
The feeling of your love was more than enough
I could have stayed forever, gazing at you
But forever would be severed by those words I said untrue

Verse 1
We met on a cold, Friday night
In the dark, baby, you were my shining light
I was knocked out when I realized
A future with a boy like you was almost in sight

Chorus
That night we were gonna paint the town with love
With a boy like you was more than enough
And even though love can be tough, baby
With a boy like you would be more than enough

Verse 2
I wish I had stayed close to you
All that's left are these words to get me through
With deep regret, feel so bad
I can't forget all we had
There is nothing I wouldn't do
To say sorry, find my way back to you
The boy I once knew
Mm, a boy like you

Chorus
That night we were gonna paint the town with love
With a boy like you was more than enough
And even though love can be tough, baby,
With a boy like you would be more than enough

Bridge
Now I'm full of remorse and there's nothing I can see
But to have you back here with me
To have the chance, a second chance
To show you better how I need
A boy like you
Mm, a boy just like you

Chorus
That night we were gonna paint the town with love
With a boy like you was more than enough
And even though love can be tough, baby,
With a boy like you would be more than enough

And that's it. I shall look forward to reading you comments & feedback.

Thank you and once again happy new year to everyone!