Hi,
I just started writing songs again about 8 months ago after a break of about 14 years. I'm in the process of recording one of my songs. It's not finished yet as I need to record the final vocal and I might change the lyrics a bit but I'd appreciate feedback. I suppose the style of music is singer/songwriter
https://soundcloud.com/mark-johnson-songs/nowhere25/s-MRXs1Lyrics
Can you feel me somewhere inside you.
'Cause you're all i see and i can't get out.
These walls stand between us.
But our aching hearts are pulling them down.
There's nowhere to run now
so we crash to the ground.
It's too dark to see
So we move to the sound
I want to know you, as you lie beneath me.
Feel the warmth of your skin, the tighter we're wound.
Let me show you the heights I'm seeing
Then hear you moan as we come back down.
There's nowhere to run now
so we crash to the ground.
The beat of our hearts
is the only sound
I long to feel you tremble
in those moments when no one else is around.
Touch the ink on your skin, the curve of your lips,
the lines of your frown.
Please believe me,
when I tell you this passion has no bounds.
There's nowhere to run now
so we crash to the ground.
It's too dark to see
So we move to the sound