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Liamsteeles

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« on: November 15, 2014, 10:03:37 AM »
I just let it bang,
someone call an ambulance,
because we got a man down,
he hit the ground without a sound,
I told you one day, that I was gonna make you proud,

You can't see me in the crowd because I blend in,
my attire all black and white, just like a Penguin,
me and you, nah we ain't on the same thing,
I just bought my main chick a wedding ring,
tell me what you think, tell me how you feel,
they say life is game, well are you gonna play,
anything you gotta say, say it to my face,
don't beat around bush, because when push comes to shove,
I brought them gloves and a shovel, see, now you in trouble,
didn't mean to burst your bubble,
but lately I've cried so many tears that I could drown in a puddle,
feeling so uncomfortable, so unworthy,
will I live to see the age of thirty? because right now I'm feeling so hurty,
that was a made up wordy, so was that, you got to think carefully,
about making decisions, just don't regret the things your missing,
I just let it bang; I wish you all a Merry Christmas.

I just let it bang,
someone call an ambulance,
because we got a man down,
he hit the ground without a sound,
I told you one day, that I was gonna make you proud,

I got to take a stand,
tell me would you still feel the same way.
if I had not even a penny in my account or a hundred grand,
they say money changes people, never knew we was such creatures,
even though we are descendants of Apes, this is our escape,
no space, but we outta place, if this is the human race,
we running laps around each other everyday,
anything is possible, even if it isn't logical,
metaphorical or comical, what we have is abominable,
just like karate this problem is choppable, like a frog, obstacles be hoppable,
this conversation is a mixture of topicals sipping on tropicals,
and if people ask me 'is this a rap song', I just reply 'yes it is one',
because all I write is raps and this 007, no James Bond,
but I remember falling asleep right next to a pond,
when I had nowhere to live, this is the part I call the sad song,
where was you when I was all alone with no where to go, no place I could call home?
nowadays you be texting and calling me, blowing up my phone,
I just let it bang; because I'm in my zone.

I just let it bang,
someone call an ambulance,
because we got a man down,
he hit the ground without a sound,
I told you one day, that I was gonna make you proud.
« Last Edit: November 15, 2014, 10:05:55 AM by Liamsteeles »

Vintage54

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« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2014, 01:05:56 AM »

        Liamsteeles, handshake man. Not a great lover of rap, in a musical sense. But i always find the lyrics of interest, i can't ignore that. You got some great lines, and interesting rhymes here my friend, i checked them out more than twice, so you got my attention. I like it man, and look forward to more of the same. High five, out of five.

                       Vintage54