[HeyYou]

I would love to hear what you guys are thinking


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Now baby when you're gone
The sun doesn't even shine on my side
The birds aren't singing in the morning
The sky doesn't look the same and it always so cloudy

I'm living in the darkness
The devil is my best friend
Baby I lost everything I had
I wanna fall I don't live this life.. I had enough

Chorus:

So angel of death
May you come? I've waited for so long
So just come take me away...
My angel of death
May you come and take me away
I don't live this life no more
I can't live another day without him

I wanna go away I wanna see him again
I wanna connect with his soul
Be where he is
Cause I can't take it no more
I can't live without him

Chorus:

So angel of death
May you come? I've waited for so long
So just come take me away...
My angel of death
May you come and take me away
I don't live this life no more
I can't live another day without him

When he gone my heart fell into the dark
I'm a dead man with heart's beats
I only have one life
And I don't wanna live it without him

Chorus:

So angel of death
May you come? I've waited for so long
So just come take me away...
My angel of death
May you come and take me away
I don't live this life no more
I can't live another day without him

[Vintage54]

          Hey You, Hello!
               Tell you what i'm thinking, if it means anything. When i first read this, then read it again, i thought, a bit drastic, and too much self pity. If the song is about a breakup, i stand by what i said. But then, i said to myself, this could be about someone who is no longer with us. If that's the case, and it's one from the heart, then i have a different point of view. I've felt the very same way after losing someone close, and yes, in my grief, wanted to follow. But life goes on, and time passes, and things get easier, though never the same. So i guess what i'm trying to say, somewhat clumsily, if its the latter, i feel it, and can relate. If it's the former, then less so. Did that make any sense, a little on the tipsy side. But either way, you touched me.

                                 Vintage54

[HeyYou]

          Hey You, Hello!
               Tell you what i'm thinking, if it means anything. When i first read this, then read it again, i thought, a bit drastic, and too much self pity. If the song is about a breakup, i stand by what i said. But then, i said to myself, this could be about someone who is no longer with us. If that's the case, and it's one from the heart, then i have a different point of view. I've felt the very same way after losing someone close, and yes, in my grief, wanted to follow. But life goes on, and time passes, and things get easier, though never the same. So i guess what i'm trying to say, somewhat clumsily, if its the latter, i feel it, and can relate. If it's the former, then less so. Did that make any sense, a little on the tipsy side. But either way, you touched me.

                                 Vintage54

Thanks for the feedback.
The song is about someone who's not longer with us
I thought it's clear when I wrote "him"

[Kevin j]

Nice lyrics, i just had a little trouble with a couple of lines like
"How baby when your gone"
I would definitely take out the "baby" , It doesnt morning really for the line and might be cause for confusion in the message of the lyrics, as so many pop/love songs use it

[HeyYou]

Nice lyrics, i just had a little trouble with a couple of lines like
"How baby when your gone"
I would definitely take out the "baby" , It doesnt morning really for the line and might be cause for confusion in the message of the lyrics, as so many pop/love songs use it

You meant "Now baby when you're gone"
Right? Cause there is no line such as "how baby when your gone" (it doesn't even make sense *_*)
Hmm ok I'll think about it. Thanks for the feedback