Just to continue Neil, feel free to use it, but one condition, don't rewrite the lyric, thats all i ask. Paulski mentioned Neil Young, and that was pretty close to where i was coming from. If you know the song "Powderfinger! Well, i love that song, where it goes "and my face splashed in the sky" that gave me the idea for the kid from Carolina part. Musical interlude every three verses would work for me. Over to you man, make em feel it.
Vintage54