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Was talking to my friends at my open mic tonight and one of them became the first person to sing the song well first verse and chorus and play guitar to it.He made a suggestion about a possible change. She Sings on a dark night Songs about love and hate Songs about roads and fate Songs in a cold dark nightto She Sings on a dark night Songs about love and hate Songs in a cold dark night Songs about roads and fateHe felt the Rhyming and ( I guess ) Rythmn felt better with the second version. What do you think?
Light shines off the dark streetsBrake lights bright at nightRain splashing in street puddlesLost in a dark bright worldShe Sings on a dark nightSongs about love and hateSongs in a cold dark nightSongs about roads and fateSongs about love and hateShe's walking home at nightFrom another day at workA dull commute in a dreary dayAll along on the dark streetsShe Sings on a dark nightSongs about love and hateSongs in a cold dark nightSongs about roads and fateSongs about love and hateShe sings to lift the nightA cold dark bright nightFeet splashing in street puddlesSings to musics 'trancing beat.Sings in a cold dark nightSongs about love and hateSongs about roads and fateSongs in a cold dark nightSongs about love and hateSongs about roads and fateSongs about love and hateSongs about love and hate