hi Dogmax, really enjoyed the verses, but I have to say the chorus was a little of a letdown for me, could I suggest something like -
''Maybe there's only darkness so the stars can shine
and burn brighter than in a pure blue sky
is that why?
is that why?''
or along those lines, something to that effect. I wouldn't change anything in the verses though
great concept for a song, can't wait to hear it