[postmn]

(verse 1)
i put some treble in,
i hold the bass
i put some paino in
i love the sounds it makes
I've been working hard
I've put heart in,I've sweat in
I've turned my swag on
I've been working for days
to hear it on a plane
to hear in my car, when u looking for a job
so

(chorus)
why do you sing my song out of tune
have you got some throat problem
you hating on my song
you think you can sing better
than me
you got voice problems, don't be singing my song
don't be singing my song,(deep) don't be singing my song

(verse 2)
just listen
(pause)
i am hitting these cords
just take notes
i am a cocky musician
(deep) i don't want my song to be spoiled
so

(chorus)
why do you sing my song out of tune
have you got some throat problem
you hating on my song
you think you can sing better
than me
you got voice problems, don't be singing my song
don't be singing my song,(deep) don't be singing my song

[massa]

If you're hearing the song on a plane, or in the car, I wouldn't care who's singing it.

Just be concentrating on spending your royalties dude! Buy me a pony!

[postmn]

masa if i ever get to were i want to, i'd rather get you piano, not a pony :L

[massa]

Aww thanks dude but I can't exactly ride a piano along the beach can I?

[Dutchbeat]

That is going to be thé summer hit of 2011

really good for a nice piano reggae song/ or some other summer melody

what are you going to do with these lyrics? are you going to put them on music?

or could the songwriters on this forum make a version / a suggestion for the music, to see what comes out?

You of course will be the final judge (Simon Cowell style?) of what the forum members come up with

[postmn]

yeah Dutchbeat you can have it, experiment on it massa a downhill beach and a piano with wheels

[gibsona07]

massa a downhill beach and a piano with wheels

Well that's the music video sorted! 

But seriously, I think these lyrics have great potential with a nice reggae/RnB beat

[Dutchbeat]

Postmn!

thanks,
I go for a piano reggae chord version then!

but challenge all songwriters

of this beautiful forum
the regular visitors
and the new ones

including Tone, his majesty  himself
the upper Songwriterforum creator

to go for any version of these sunny lyrics!!!!

who dares?

[massa]

Are you asking if any of us want to write music for these lyrics?

In the wise words of Duncan Bannatyne...

"I think you're mad. I'm out!"

Or phonetically - "Ah 'hink yur mad. Ahm out!"

[Dutchbeat]

It was just a crazy tought of me

sorry for that  , especially as these are lyrics from Postmn

but I think i am going to give it try and send the result to Postmn