Hey - very nice idea for a song.
Bit difficult to find lyrics not knowing the chords progression or feel of the music.
However, if I may, I first would like to correct some things:
everyone's got a book in them
should be
Everyone's got a book within them
or
Everyone's got their own book inside
fleeing jailbreakers
just sounds a bit odd... you may want to look that up or find a better expression... maybe something like jail breakers on the run...
+ I don't see the metaphorical connection between jail breaker and books... but maybe it's an insider for you, fair enough.
If you really don't want a rhyme with
smiling faces
then that's cool.
Otherwise, why not make a play on words with faces - face it
"I knew that it had faded, didn't wanna face it"
I could've wrote three
- I could've written...
like an open wound_ rubbed with gin
Another remark: I think you should be careful when using a metaphor as basis for a relationship. Though I like the idea, you should be careful not to go in and out of it. You also should pay attention to lines that just sound a bit too simple or corny - meaning, don't switch between clever metaphorical style and clichés UNLESS you do it on purpose in order to express a kind of contrast. But again: then you should be aware of it.
wearing smiles on our faces
- Man, that just sounds like somethin I've hear a thousand times before - I think you can do better than that
I really like the suggestion for a chorus by
Boydie.
How about something like this:
Who can you blame when you know that you are the writer?
How can you choke rage when you're just a poet and not a fighter?
Lost for words. What's my line? I can't seem to turn the page!
In this heart of mine
there's a bookmark with your nameor:
in the story of my life
I'll keep a bookmark with your name
Of course, you might have to adjust meter and so to the music you have written or in mind.