[postmn]

back to normal something different

Where does the sun turn dark, behind the moon
where i am cos im fool
i get my howl on, get no howl back cos im howling to mars
im tourist, i thought the spaceship was a tour bus

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crashed into earth, this is what you seeing
your not dreaming, i am wearing fruity loop colors
i stick out more than beers impersonating drummers
im an alien like E.T, a point a lot
don't be hoping to see something floating
cos my glow is broken

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ive been tag and bagged, had a bag on my head
got caught with the french, things got intense
America was saying why didn't you land in my yard
i said ' ju ne peut pas faire crescents"


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[jim morrison]

Like this, sounds pretty upbeat

[jodyWayne]

This really is different.  I like the concept.  Excellent work!

[postmn]

thank you jim and jody , got some mics today, so shud be able to put my voice or something else in it

[jodyWayne]

Good!  I cain't wait to hear this one.
Let us know when we can.

[massa]

I don't know. Some of this makes no sense, whilst parts certainly are out of this world.

Either you have written this intentionally to be in the language of a martian who can't spell.

Or

You really need to proof read, and spell check.

[postmn]

mass im gonna go with the first one, your one of the people i aim to impress and if you aint feeling, i go back to the drawing board. so im going to explain the whole song.

Where does the sun turn dark, behind the moon= eclipse
where i am cos im fool= is stupid
i get my howl on, get no howl back cos im howling to mars= howling for rescue at mars, but there's no people on mars
im tourist, i thought the spaceship was a tour bus= so stupid, i'd mistaken a spaceship for a tour bus on my planet, also i is a tourist

10,9,8,7,6 54321
10,9,8,7,6 54321= blast off sequence
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crashed into earth, this is what you seeing
your not dreaming, i am wearing fruity loop colors'= in bright colors cos he is a tourist
i stick out more than beers impersonating drummers= beers impersonating drummers, wud be a pretty noticeable thing
im an alien like E.T, a point a lot= taking the mick out of ET
don't be hoping to see something floating= SAME HERE
cos my glow is broken=SAME HERE

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10,9,8,7,6 54321
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ive been tag and bagged, had a bag on my head= got caught
got caught with the french, things got intense= by the french
America was saying why didn't you land in my yard= America usually gets UFO landings
i said ' ju ne peut pas faire crescents"= cant make croissants ( i dont know why thats there anymore)

[Sonic-r]

Don't listen to him he reads stats for fun. 

The croissants line is inspired. Keep the surrealism in there and go with what comes out of your head naturally. If you think too much you'll end up sounding like Toto.

Chris

[massa]

LMAO! I live for the stats!

Don't be stupid, you don't need to impress me. I'm privileged to read your work. I don't know why you've explained it to me. I knew what you were trying to say, more or less.

I just didn't know if you meant to say "where i am cos im fool", to make it look like the Alien couldn't speak English, (and other similar phrases). Or if you have trouble constructing sentences.

I'm pretty sure croissant is a French word, and doesn't translate to crescent. And the French word for I is Je, not Ju.

The sunsets are lovely.

[spacedogg]

Just for the record: croissant is indeed french and does indeed loosely translate as crescent. Is it another ET reference, like when Elliot is flying past the moon on his bike with ET in the front basket?

[postmn]

sonic-r who is toto, massa wat are stats? and spacedogg i had to get a dictionary just to be sure, when i was writing that line