By themselves, the words don't flow naturally. For song, they sound flawless. I hope the music would be expressive ala I Want You (She's So Heavy). 'Cause the lyrics could use more personalisation and/or insight. It reads like it's trying to meet with some generic standard, therefore rendering your subject - a little bit 2d. I've been there. And I still go there sometimes. Great theme. And i like the title too. Write on.