Hello
https://soundcloud.com/reflectionandthempva/stalling-my-falling-star-rough-demoHad this song bouncing around my DAW for a couple of months, song was actually written in 1999.
Needs something to give the chorus more boost and i can't put my finger on what? By boost, I mean, give It that returned home feeling???
Lead vocal needs something too, ideas ? feedback much appreciated cheers.
(this is the first time I've put what i feel to be, unfinished track up on my sound cloud so I won't keep it there long)
Lyrics
Stalling my falling starA’int no reason, why there,
A’int no dark
something tells me, that I,
A’int got far, but all of my
self intentions, are just,
way too large, i got
Inhibitions, that i,
A’int apart, of all your
future plans, so woman don't,
sing that song,
You know i, need a place to park in,
all my dreams of old
It seem like your stalling my falling star
See them look at me, with those,
eyes in half
I tell them, take it easy man,
I'm just taking it, all the straight path
so many stories, I can’t,
read them all
I need to, mark my pages, man,
I gotta,keep my mind aloft
No encouragement, and yet,
so many flaws
you try to, sell me love,
like its sold in coffee jars
It seem like your stalling my falling star
If you should ever call on me, and maybe you will
just know you can always call on me, and ill come from far
don't go stalling my falling star