hey paul
so sorry for late reply just got back from a hol
yeah again you produce a real believable tale
this is real life in so many i loved the verses
but something i can't put my finger on didn't quite flow or feel
right with the chorus, it could be the some traffic signs should be ignored
see for me i would say read all the signs / don't ignore the signs
hope you know what i mean paul
but knowing you when i hear you sing this i'll feel differently
a very good tale though really enjoyed this
tony...
Hi Tony - thanks for the read and comments. Yeah - I meant "don't go down a road if you recognize the sign as one you've been down before." But maybe needs a reword in the chorus to get the point across better. Thanks again Tony - really helps to get others' prospectives.
Paul
