[Paulski]

But it seems it's just about this one guy who gets stuck in traffic a lot.

Well, he gets stuck in life a lot - but you're right: I avoided explaining that juxtaposition in the lyric. It's a fairly up-tempo blues song - so hopefully will still work..
Thanks for commenting!
Paul

[PENKSLYRICS]

Really like this, flows really well and that title matched with vehicles is true class cause I was expecting something totally different.

To agree with other comments, the easy rhymes as you called them work perfectly fine. Nothing sounds out of place to me. Definitely want to hear this when the music's done.

Roger

[Paulski]

Really like this, flows really well and that title matched with vehicles is true class cause I was expecting something totally different.

To agree with other comments, the easy rhymes as you called them work perfectly fine. Nothing sounds out of place to me. Definitely want to hear this when the music's done.

Roger

Thanks Roger - appreciate the positive feedback.
cheers
Paul