I like those lyrics but i think it's quiet difficult to sing this song? Or do you already have a melody for this song?
I actually wrote the music first, then added the lyrics to the music. It's a lot easier to write lyrics that way actually. That's not how I always do it, but it's one of my favorite methods of writing. And sometimes it comes out well. I'll upload it in the next few weeks and let you know it's here.