Hi, this is my first post on this forum, a Facebook friend suggested I posted here.
I'm a member of a small songwriting group and we set ourselves monthly writing challenges. This month's challenge / inspiration was a photograph of a bunch of signs (it's the picture on the soundcloud post).
It's a bit if a departure from my regular style of song - aiming for something more 'soulful'. I think it needs a bit more adding (a bridge or a break) to flesh it out?
Anyway, hope you enjoy and any feedback would be greatfuly received.
C.D.
http://soundcloud.com/oldmanknott/little-lost-demo-rough-editDarling, can you give me a sign?
Could you point out a direction?
I thought I'd set a course,
But now I think it needs some correction.
Darling, can you show me the way (to blue skies)?
Could you show me the way to a sunny day?
See I'm still a little lost,
Only so many moves I can play.
It's never going to happen,
Help me find my way around,
I keep looking at this map that you gave me,
But I think I've got it upside down.
Darling, we could spend a little time,
Let's head down to sunset beach,
We could get a little lost,
Put ourselves out of reach.
It's never going to happen,
You got to help me find my way around,
I keep looking at this map that you gave me,
But I think I've got it upside down...