Thank you both! It's the "skeptical", I think. A little strained, isn't it? I hope it doesn't spoil the message or effect - or that I'll come up with two better lines to replace the lines in question.
I'm also thinking about scrapping the line "your private five star events". It's only there because I liked the idea so much, but it's actually superfluous. I'll probably also change the first "while" to "as": "as you rest for a while".
Someone suggested "health issues" instead of "illness" - better.
I've written it for my sister. Leukemia, chemo. She's not the type to cut back easily.
Thanks again,
Bernd