I posted this under "works in progress" as an instrumental, then posted the lyrics. Got a really good response to the instrumental, but no responses at all to the lyric. I'd like to get a sense of whether it's terrible, or whether everyone had already heard the instrumental so just didn't comment.
BTW... What makes this Anne's Song is that it's based on a musical idea of a good friend named Anne. I was showing her how to use the chord generator, and she sang in one of her lyrical ideas. Two years later, I took it and modified the chord patterns a little, and liked it a lot.
The lyric is one I wrote in my head over twenty years ago.... to the tune of a song by the Box Tops from 1969. The song was "Sweet Cream Ladies." (Frightfully interesting song btw if you want to look it up)
Three years ago, I finally got around to writing down the lyric that had never really left my head.
I tried numerous ideas for this instrumental, then thought of that twenty year old lyric just sitting there, and if fit seamlessly.
www.reverbnation.com/HTMworksinprogressAdditionally, this lyric is a "parable." "Parables" follow a specific format. They confront the audience with an outrageous behavior by "them." Then, through the telling, when the audience is enraged against "them" there is an increasingly uncomfortable sense that it's actually about "us" not "them."
This lyric is not about some unspecified "them."
Anne's Song - "KILL THE MESSENGER"
If we kill the messenger
when bad news comes a calling.
We will be the last to know
If ever skies are falling.
If we punish truth,
then all we'll ever hear are lies.
Surely that's a fact we should
accept and realize.
We push so hard,
We go so fast,
We lose control and then.
We miss the turn,
We crash and burn.
Then we do it all over again.
Blessed is he, Blessed is he, Blessed is he who will see.
In a world of broken promises -
a world of shattered dreams.
A world where nothing we are told
is ever what it seems.
Is it our fault for believing them?
Is it their fault for the lying?
Will we just kill the messenger
while truth lies slowly dying.
We push so hard,
we go so fast,
we lose control and then.
We miss the turn,
We Crash and burn,
then we do it all over again.
Blessed is he, blessed is he, blessed is he who will see.
Blessed is he, blessed is he, blessed is he who will see.
It's a world of compromise.
What's sacred we defile.
A world where cheaters prosper for
at least a little while.
Is this world worth the saving or?
Should we throw it all away?
It's easy to kill the messenger
When he bows his head to pray?
We'll kill the messenger again
when he bows his head to pray?