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Hi Gwyneth,
I like the mystery of the riddle, did she, didn't she? I feel the last line shows that she did kill them. Silence leaves the riddle unsolved. Altogether a better way to end the song for me. I realise that what I like isn't too everybody's taste so feel free to ignore my suggestion if you like what you've written.
As to the chorus, I like the first version, it comes across as more direct.
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LOL Hi D
This really is no riddle at all!!! Everyone knows she's gonna do it hehehe. I like the way you think and also love to love something to the imagination at the end, but in this case it's really obvious :-) Thanks my friend again :-)