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Tales Of Me And You

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Nellie

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Re: Tales Of Me And You

« Reply #15 on: April 21, 2014, 04:57:43 PM »
Thank you very muchhh! I'll try to change the bits that need to be changed according to suggestions written on here so thank you so much to everyone writing their opinion and helping me, as well! :)
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Re: Tales Of Me And You

« Reply #16 on: April 23, 2014, 10:44:02 PM »
Hi,

I liked this straight from the first line! A very pleasant read.

Good images and plenty more fine lines after the aforementioned first one!

Nice one,

Phil.
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« Reply #17 on: April 24, 2014, 08:13:43 PM »
Hi, great song.  To me the prechorus and chorus are very strong, I can hear them build up in my mind as I read - that could sound awesome.  I agree the 'glue' needs work tho
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Re: Tales Of Me And You

« Reply #18 on: April 25, 2014, 01:24:36 PM »
PeeJay - Hi Phil! That's very kind to say, thank you veeery much! I appreciate it! :)

GTB - Hii! Thank you so so much for reading and lovely words, that's nice to hear! I'm thinking of changing the glue part to what ''shortwhat'' generously suggested! :)
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