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Peppermint

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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #15 on: March 30, 2014, 04:05:37 PM »
Hey Gwyneth Rose,

Have sent you a pm with my email address send it to that and I'll give it a listen  :)

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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #16 on: March 30, 2014, 04:36:37 PM »
Okay I'm going to post my Hey Hey Bully in the completed songs section so you guys can have a listen.
The music was done by Raymie James and he is a fantastic muso, so talented. But seriously need a great vocal to complete this, Hopefully Peppermint?? Sending you the MP3 and hope you can voice over and do it justice.

So I would really appreciate eyour honest opinion here, because personally, as great as it is,  I don't think the music matches the lyric, but hey, maybe I'm wrong LOL

Cheers
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #17 on: March 30, 2014, 05:56:02 PM »
Hi Gwyneth

This is really good lyric.
I love how it's written different from typical "pity victim style" to "stand up and fight" attitude with a catchy chorus on your lips "Hey hey bully"! ;)

Great one

Hugo

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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #18 on: March 30, 2014, 09:29:45 PM »
Quote from: Hugozhor on March 30, 2014, 05:56:02 PM
Hi Gwyneth

This is really good lyric.
I love how it's written different from typical "pity victim style" to "stand up and fight" attitude with a catchy chorus on your lips "Hey hey bully"! ;)

Great one

Hugo


Thanks so much Hugo. Go and listen to it in the completed songs section. I hope you like Blues...

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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #19 on: March 30, 2014, 10:11:22 PM »
Wow, these lyrics are so beautiful and inspiring.
I really love the end  where the bullied girl catches the bully.
I couldn't help myself to make some simple piano arrangements to the song.
I'm really sorry :).
I look forward to read more lyrics of you :D.

Niels
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #20 on: March 31, 2014, 07:06:25 AM »
Quote from: Niels on March 30, 2014, 10:11:22 PM
Wow, these lyrics are so beautiful and inspiring.
I really love the end  where the bullied girl catches the bully.
I couldn't help myself to make some simple piano arrangements to the song.
I'm really sorry :).
I look forward to read more lyrics of you :D.

Niels

Hi Niels
Thank you so much. It's always nice to hear another Artists interpretation. So happy it inspired you.
So why don't you share your piano arrangements. Would love to hear  ;D
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #21 on: March 31, 2014, 07:37:36 AM »
I will certainly do, when I got the time to record it :).

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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #22 on: March 31, 2014, 02:55:36 PM »
Hi Gwyneth,

As promised I have here my interpretation of your beautiful lyrics.
I'm sorry for the poor quality (I've got much to learn :) ).

https://soundcloud.com/user4251360/hey-bully-work-in-progress

I hope you like what I've done with it :).

Niels
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #23 on: April 01, 2014, 06:57:24 AM »
Quote from: Niels on March 31, 2014, 02:55:36 PM
Hi Gwyneth,

As promised I have here my interpretation of your beautiful lyrics.
I'm sorry for the poor quality (I've got much to learn :) ).

https://soundcloud.com/user4251360/hey-bully-work-in-progress

I hope you like what I've done with it :).

Niels

Hey Niels,

Wow!! I can see why you wanted to play around with these lyrics. Your piano accomplishment is really fantastic, I think this could seriously be eventually fine tuned into a a fabulous version. Well done, enjoyed your work in progress very much. Thanks Niels.  ;D
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #24 on: April 04, 2014, 05:57:18 PM »
hey

I liked it, painted a nice picture of the girl "with socks that didn't match"

and the end was good came unexpected and was very thought-provoking :)
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #25 on: April 05, 2014, 03:32:38 PM »
Quote from: EpiphoneEpiphany on April 04, 2014, 05:57:18 PM
hey

I liked it, painted a nice picture of the girl "with socks that didn't match"

and the end was good came unexpected and was very thought-provoking :)

Thanks so much for the great feedback. Really chauffed you liked it  ;D ;D ;D
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #26 on: April 05, 2014, 07:34:49 PM »
Hiiii! This is a well written song with a really powerful meaning. I'm glad I read it and I like the way it ends! Great, great job you did with this! :)
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Re: Hey, Hey Bully

« Reply #27 on: April 05, 2014, 10:55:10 PM »
Quote from: Nellie on April 05, 2014, 07:34:49 PM
Hiiii! This is a well written song with a really powerful meaning. I'm glad I read it and I like the way it ends! Great, great job you did with this! :)

Thanks Nellie, so glad  you enjoyed, also thanks for the kind words :-)
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